Do you like to write and commit your thoughts for others to read? If you want to write well, avoid these analogies that were actually written by high school students:
- "Her hair glistened in the rain like nose hair after a sneeze."
- "He was as tall as a six-foot-three-inch tree."
- "McBride fell 12 stories, hitting the pavement like a Hefty Bag filled with vegetable soup."
- "The little boat gently drifted across the pond exactly the way a bowling ball wouldn't."
- "John and Mary had never met. They were like two hummingbirds who had also never met."
- "Long separated by cruel fate, the star-crossed lovers raced across the grassy field toward each other like two freight trains, one having left Cleveland at 6:36 p.m. traveling at 55 mph, the other from Topeka at 4:19 p.m. at 35 mph."
Aw ....i was just punnin' around but those were cute.
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